one of her good days—
in the birdbath
a wrinkle of ice

 

2 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    __Here, such reader thoughts are generated Joanne, and that is the aim of minimal verse; my thanks to you. _m

    cold morning birdbath
    due to floats of last night's ice
    grosbeak passes

  2. Julie Schwerin Says:

    "One of her good days" says so much. We take those wrinkles when we can and are grateful. Thank you for your lovely poem.

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