Venus appears,
a sharp curl of light
planed off
the gone sun
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d. f. tweney is the publisher of tinywords.com. He lives in the San Francisco Bay Area with his wife, two children, two dogs, and a cat. He tries to write haiku every day, but he doesn't always succeed.
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centrifigal rays
climbing through such misty sky
clouds spin-rise song
centrifigal rays
climbing through such misty sky
clouds spin-rise song
Wonderful haiku with an explicit metaphor!