mid-August night
a few fireflies
have overslept

5 Responses

  1. Michael Lee Johnson Says:

    Very nice image, clever, but not a true Haiku.

  2. Sabra Says:

    Why is this not a true haiku?

  3. Michael Lee Johnson Says:

    5-7-5 IS A TRUE HAIKU NOT JUST IMAGES.

  4. Magyar Says:

    in August's night light
    as fire-flies dance with stars
    silent harmony

    _ Just a cloudy thought… so nicely felt Stuart_! _m

  5. Alan Summers Says:

    "Yes, fireflies, which are actually a type of beetle, share a relationship with weather that goes deeper than the summer solstice. Their larvae live underground during winter, mature during spring, and then emerge in early summer anywhere from the third week in May to the third week in June."
    Farmers Almanac, Tiffany Means, USA

    mid-August night
    a few fireflies
    have overslept

    —STUART BARTOW

    Was this the Common Eastern Firefly or Big Dipper Firefly?

    Yep, fireflies are EARLY SUMMER, but I bet some did oversleep!

    Wonderful haiku!

    .

    glass of merlot
    the night shares itself
    with fireflies

    Alan Summers
    Asahi Shimbun (Japan, November 2018)

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