runaway kite tip of the string soiled with blood
(Originally published in Heliosparrow)
—Elisa Theriana
Issue 23.2 | 24 October 2023
L3 is stunning. Good haiku, Elisa
This haiku is part of my collaboration rengay with Ron Moss, it’s about death, we wrote it after the sudden passing of my brother.
Thank you for your comment, Kala 🙏
A highly visual ku that invites the reader to imagine a back story.
marion
So sorry to lesrn that this was based on such a tragic event, Elisa. My sincere condolences.
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October 24th, 2023 at 10:54 am
L3 is stunning.
Good haiku, Elisa
October 25th, 2023 at 9:43 am
This haiku is part of my collaboration rengay with Ron Moss, it’s about death, we wrote it after the sudden passing of my brother.
Thank you for your comment, Kala 🙏
October 26th, 2023 at 12:36 am
A highly visual ku that invites the reader to imagine a back story.
marion
October 26th, 2023 at 12:38 am
So sorry to lesrn that this was based on such a tragic event, Elisa. My sincere condolences.
marion