Reminiscences
I just finished work on the night shift and went topside to get fresh air. No one was on deck, and I could see the Destroyer’s trail of smoke above the glass sea form a circle as we crossed our wake practicing maneuvers in the midnight sun. There was a lonely feeling that came over me just then…
from her dark hip the moon’s curve
April 17th, 2024 at 9:41 am
Now that brought back some memories to this old sailor. ⚓️
April 17th, 2024 at 10:54 am
The haiku alone is mesmerizing, but adding the situation makes it more so.
April 17th, 2024 at 11:15 am
Thanks William and Alma for your replies! Sorry for the typo (one) on.
April 22nd, 2024 at 8:51 am
I love the otherworldly-ness.. Ness of this haiku. Magical!
October 16th, 2024 at 9:25 am
Typo all fixed. Apologies. –Peter