until we meet again spring rain
—Elisa Theriana
Issue 24.2 | 15 January 2025
Most beautifully worded.
very poignant.
I like the simplicity and multilayed meaning and expectation expressed in this poem.
I love the hinge on “again.” Like one of those pictures that can be seen two ways, a reversible figure.
Beautiful, Elisa!
marion
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January 15th, 2025 at 12:06 pm
Most beautifully worded.
January 15th, 2025 at 12:07 pm
very poignant.
January 16th, 2025 at 5:49 pm
I like the simplicity and multilayed meaning and expectation expressed in this poem.
February 7th, 2025 at 9:32 am
I love the hinge on “again.” Like one of those pictures that can be seen two ways, a reversible figure.
February 14th, 2025 at 4:37 am
Beautiful, Elisa!
marion