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1. @andreochka Says:
   November 9th, 2012 at 12:29 pm

   Lovely…

2. moonlace Says:
   November 9th, 2012 at 12:50 pm

   I love this! Immediate delight and a chuckle. It is homey and warm. So nice!
   yeah…sweet!

3. Ann Hursey Says:
   November 9th, 2012 at 12:59 pm

   Because I am also 61 and one doesn't often see a haiku addressing this age. . .I love this poem and will post it to FB.

4. Dan Schwerin Says:
   November 9th, 2012 at 1:30 pm

   Well done, Marjorie. So gently done.

5. Marie Shimane Says:
   November 9th, 2012 at 2:03 pm

   in a tea room
   overlooking winter's lake
   sixty-nine tomorrow

   (World Haiku Review Haiku of Merit, January 2011)

6. Marjorie Buettner Says:
   November 9th, 2012 at 2:54 pm

   Lovely to read these wonderful comments…thanks to everyone and thanks to tinywords for posting!

7. Glenda Henderson Says:
   November 9th, 2012 at 3:44 pm

   Beautiful picture in 9 words! Good job.

8. patricia reid Says:
   November 9th, 2012 at 5:18 pm

   love yr jux here marjorie & having passed that point am (now) looking forward to sweetness increasing.

9. Margaret Dornaus Says:
   November 9th, 2012 at 10:01 pm

   Delicious image . . . so full of joy!

10. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:
    November 10th, 2012 at 2:07 am

    Delightfully tasty little haiku!

11. old pajamas Says:
    November 10th, 2012 at 10:41 am

    counting my age
    in crows; at sixty-five
    they slip away,
    the black of them
    near end of day

12. Alan Summers Says:
    November 12th, 2012 at 9:28 am

    I love jam for my toast, and wish I could spread this haiku for breakfast. Enjoyed.

    Alan

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