This beautifully captures that feeling, Kristen. . . I've been there . . . and "touches a sore point" probably literally as well as emotionally. Thank you.
This one certainly captures the tension involved. Getting down to essentials a long way further than 'I am what I eat'. The brevity and the one line form suits the content very well.
February 22nd, 2013 at 2:07 pm
This is exquisite, Kirsten.
February 22nd, 2013 at 3:09 pm
Wow!
February 22nd, 2013 at 5:02 pm
utterly present, thankyou
February 22nd, 2013 at 5:13 pm
beautiful . . .
February 22nd, 2013 at 5:23 pm
Hearing the beat of life in ourselves does bring us back to the life force essence. Simply, beautifully penned.
February 22nd, 2013 at 7:01 pm
Thanks so much to all for your enthusiastic comments here. This one still touches a sore point for me . . .
February 23rd, 2013 at 11:13 am
We are close to you…
February 22nd, 2013 at 8:31 pm
This beautifully captures that feeling, Kristen. . . I've been there . . . and "touches a sore point" probably literally as well as emotionally. Thank you.
February 22nd, 2013 at 9:15 pm
Very poignant, Kirsten.
February 23rd, 2013 at 1:24 am
Perfect
February 23rd, 2013 at 3:15 am
Good and real.
February 24th, 2013 at 8:07 am
Love it. I should have written one on my brain MRI a couple of weeks ago. It's like seeing into you. Very nice.
February 23rd, 2013 at 8:47 am
I put it at the top of my favorites.
good luck, Kirsten !
February 23rd, 2013 at 10:29 am
Excellent! This one has the strongest feeling in a haiku that I've read in a long time!
February 25th, 2013 at 11:07 am
Perfect Kristen.
February 25th, 2013 at 2:12 pm
This one certainly captures the tension involved. Getting down to essentials a long way further than 'I am what I eat'. The brevity and the one line form suits the content very well.