Wow Dawn –
This is beautiful and moving! Represents the intimacy that I have tried to embrace with the natural world all my life. Wish I had written it!
Thank you, Jeff. Your comments mean so much to me. My favorite season was summer, but for the last few years it has been spring. I love all the winds seasons..each make me pause and feel alive and rich.
This is a beautiful haiku Dawn. As the other readers have commented, such lightness of touch, such sensuality of encounter is brought to mind. I feel a whirl of connotation, like a breeze flitting among the buds.
There may have been a particular person in mind for whom the poem was written, but your use of the word "you" sends a tingle down my spine. You have stepped out of your self when you wrote this, but have taken on the persona of the goddess of spring, and are bestowing the blessing of the season on me too. Thank you
Thank you! I love your comments!!!
The most wind ravishing experiences I have had, have been on the beach. I don't go often anymore, but still relish the memories of delicious warm wind all over my skin.
I wrote this haiku about a year ago. It is one of my favorites. I am so happy it is published. ♥ to u.
March 20th, 2013 at 10:27 am
Yes!
Thank you.
March 21st, 2013 at 4:18 am
Thank you, Frances :)
March 20th, 2013 at 10:27 am
Bright, touching many senses, sexy.
March 21st, 2013 at 4:17 am
Thank you, Dirk.
March 20th, 2013 at 10:29 am
Lovely.
March 21st, 2013 at 4:16 am
Thank you, Robert.
March 21st, 2013 at 6:06 am
Lovely tribute to spring . . .
March 21st, 2013 at 6:15 am
Thank you, Margaret! You are so sweet.
March 21st, 2013 at 1:22 pm
Oh this is beautiful, Dawn!
March 26th, 2013 at 6:47 am
Thank you, Marion. So glad you think so!
March 22nd, 2013 at 4:44 am
Excellent Dawn!
March 22nd, 2013 at 10:56 am
Thank you, Scott. So happy you liked it.
March 22nd, 2013 at 2:31 pm
Gentle & light. I admire the light touch in this one, Dawn.
March 23rd, 2013 at 5:06 pm
Thanks, Lorin! So glad to hear you liked it.
March 24th, 2013 at 2:45 pm
lovely and sensual, Dawn :)
March 26th, 2013 at 6:48 am
Thanks, Polona!
March 29th, 2013 at 7:34 pm
Wow Dawn –
This is beautiful and moving! Represents the intimacy that I have tried to embrace with the natural world all my life. Wish I had written it!
March 30th, 2013 at 7:16 am
Thank you, Jeff. Your comments mean so much to me. My favorite season was summer, but for the last few years it has been spring. I love all the winds seasons..each make me pause and feel alive and rich.
April 1st, 2013 at 4:45 am
This is a beautiful haiku Dawn. As the other readers have commented, such lightness of touch, such sensuality of encounter is brought to mind. I feel a whirl of connotation, like a breeze flitting among the buds.
There may have been a particular person in mind for whom the poem was written, but your use of the word "you" sends a tingle down my spine. You have stepped out of your self when you wrote this, but have taken on the persona of the goddess of spring, and are bestowing the blessing of the season on me too. Thank you
April 2nd, 2013 at 4:41 am
Thank you! I love your comments!!!
The most wind ravishing experiences I have had, have been on the beach. I don't go often anymore, but still relish the memories of delicious warm wind all over my skin.
I wrote this haiku about a year ago. It is one of my favorites. I am so happy it is published. ♥ to u.