heat lightning the rain on the grass reflects each strike
(Originally received 1st Prize? in The Liverpool Virtual Book Fair Twitter Haiku Contest 2014 as part of the city’s International Festival of Business.)
—Alan Summers
Issue 14.2 | 12 November 2014
Beautiful, Alan! The imagery is all-encompassing. And the jolt, visceral.
Thank you Julie, that's a lovely comment, especially from someone where I am a huge fan.
warmest regards,
Alan
vivid and thought-provoking, Alan.
Thank you!
Yes, on the surface it's just about the 'weather' but there's also human weather issues.
kind regards,
Such vivid imagery! Beautiful and captivating. Well done, Alan! :)
Thank you! I appreciate your words very much.
warm regards,
Great use of the zoom in technique, Alan, from the heat lightning to its reflection on the wet blades of grass. Wonderful.
marion
Many thanks Marion !:-)
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November 12th, 2014 at 10:20 am
Beautiful, Alan! The imagery is all-encompassing. And the jolt, visceral.
November 12th, 2014 at 10:27 am
Thank you Julie, that's a lovely comment, especially from someone where I am a huge fan.
warmest regards,
Alan
November 12th, 2014 at 3:11 pm
vivid and thought-provoking, Alan.
November 13th, 2014 at 3:50 am
Thank you!
Yes, on the surface it's just about the 'weather' but there's also human weather issues.
kind regards,
Alan
November 18th, 2014 at 3:59 pm
Such vivid imagery! Beautiful and captivating. Well done, Alan! :)
December 7th, 2014 at 3:19 pm
Thank you! I appreciate your words very much.
warm regards,
Alan
November 20th, 2014 at 1:26 am
Great use of the zoom in technique, Alan, from the heat lightning to its reflection on the wet blades of grass. Wonderful.
marion
December 7th, 2014 at 3:18 pm
Many thanks Marion !:-)
warm regards,
Alan