barbed wire spirals along the church wall
—Helen Buckingham
Issue 15.1 | 27 May 2015
I like the way "spirals" is both a noun and a verb, its dual nature accentuated by having its own line. Powerful haiku.
Another winner of multiplicity of meanings. Nice.
This one is so alive with meanings and images . . . it could be so many things. The two adjectives and that middle line heighten the intrigue and possibility. A memorable haiku.
Many thanks to all for your great comments.
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May 27th, 2015 at 9:45 am
I like the way "spirals" is both a noun and a verb, its dual nature accentuated by having its own line. Powerful haiku.
May 27th, 2015 at 9:48 am
Another winner of multiplicity of meanings. Nice.
May 27th, 2015 at 4:41 pm
This one is so alive with meanings and images . . . it could be so many things. The two adjectives and that middle line heighten the intrigue and possibility. A memorable haiku.
May 28th, 2015 at 5:05 am
Many thanks to all for your great comments.