barbed wire
along the church wall


4 Responses

  1. Sheila Sondik Says:

    I like the way "spirals" is both a noun and a verb, its dual nature accentuated by having its own line. Powerful haiku.

  2. Peggy Bilbro Says:

    Another winner of multiplicity of meanings. Nice.

  3. Jan Dobb Says:

    This one is so alive with meanings and images . . . it could be so many things. The two adjectives and that middle line heighten the intrigue and possibility. A memorable haiku.

  4. Helen Buckingham Says:

    Many thanks to all for your great comments.

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