along the church wall
Issue 15.1 | 27 May 2015
I like the way "spirals" is both a noun and a verb, its dual nature accentuated by having its own line. Powerful haiku.
Another winner of multiplicity of meanings. Nice.
This one is so alive with meanings and images . . . it could be so many things. The two adjectives and that middle line heighten the intrigue and possibility. A memorable haiku.
Many thanks to all for your great comments.
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