adopted ? at the river’s origin I quench my thirst
(originally appeared in Bottle Rockets #34)
—Susan Constable
Issue 16.1 | 28 April 2016
The feeling of resting, content that you are where you began, where you belong. Loved your haiku.
Poignant, Susan Deep and many layered and I think this ku will stay with me.
As Kala says, many-layered. How many kinds of thirst does this include? Bill Kenney
Nice one, Susan. Thanks for sharing.
__Susan, your heartful verse stimulated this, this view of Earthy cycles; I thank you Susan. _m
spring's spill its water flows to the seas earth's blood
__That spring, the rivers source, where life of Earth begins.
What a rich and beautiful haiku this is, Susan.
Lovely!
Very nice.
A fine ku, Susan.
marion
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April 28th, 2016 at 2:52 pm
The feeling of resting, content that you are where you began, where you belong. Loved your haiku.
April 28th, 2016 at 4:47 pm
Poignant, Susan
Deep and many layered and I think this ku will stay with me.
April 28th, 2016 at 6:19 pm
As Kala says, many-layered. How many kinds of thirst does this include?
Bill Kenney
April 28th, 2016 at 8:03 pm
Nice one, Susan. Thanks for sharing.
April 29th, 2016 at 6:21 am
__Susan, your heartful verse stimulated this, this view of Earthy cycles; I thank you Susan. _m
spring's spill
its water flows to the seas
earth's blood
__That spring, the rivers source, where life of Earth begins.
April 29th, 2016 at 12:44 pm
What a rich and beautiful haiku this is, Susan.
April 29th, 2016 at 4:48 pm
Lovely!
April 29th, 2016 at 8:02 pm
Very nice.
May 23rd, 2016 at 4:19 am
A fine ku, Susan.
marion