pear blossoms
another parking ticket
for my stolen car
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Deborah P Kolodji
Deborah P Kolodji moderates the Southern California Haiku Study Group, which meets monthly in Pasadena, CA at the Pacific Asia Museum. A former president of the Science Fiction Poetry Association, she is the California Regional Coordinator of the Haiku Society of America. She has published over 800 haiku.
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The pathos of contemporary life, done with a smile. Good one, Debbie. Bill Kenney
It's been awhile but I wanted to drop by and tell you I enjoyed your multi-dimensional poem. The ending was certainly surprise. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Congratulations on your publication.
The pathos of contemporary life, done with a smile. Good one, Debbie. Bill Kenney
I like how the juxtaposition with ‘pear blossoms’ artfully merges these odd, random surprises into the inevitable rotation of the seasons.
My very small light
It burns, but not too brightly
It burns just the same
Debrorah,
It's been awhile but I wanted to drop by and tell you I enjoyed your multi-dimensional poem. The ending was certainly surprise. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Congratulations on your publication.
Blessings,
Karen
Not exactly manna from heaven, but an excellent haiku, Debbie
I like it.