another parking ticket
for my stolen car
—Deborah P Kolodji
Issue 16.1 | 25 April 2016
The pathos of contemporary life, done with a smile. Good one, Debbie. Bill Kenney
I like how the juxtaposition with ‘pear blossoms’ artfully merges these odd, random surprises into the inevitable rotation of the seasons.
My very small light
It burns, but not too brightly
It burns just the same
It's been awhile but I wanted to drop by and tell you I enjoyed your multi-dimensional poem. The ending was certainly surprise. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Congratulations on your publication.
Not exactly manna from heaven, but an excellent haiku, Debbie
I like it.
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