unpacked box on the kitchen table? foreign headlines
—Michael Dylan Welch
Issue 17.1 | 10 May 2017
Great haiku; shades of SE Asia!
ocean waves~~~ the falling sun burns the sand
Lots of intrigue in this one. I love how something so ordinary as a box on a kitchen table becomes a gateway for mystery. The unopened box and the foreign headlines provide the tension that leave us with a feeling of anxiousness. Nice Michael.
The box is actually opened (unpacked).
Interesting. It's like
A few things certain A few ascertained Life is all about present.
Intriguing, Michael. This felt like someone who has just arrived in a new environment where everything is strange.
marion
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May 10th, 2017 at 9:08 am
Great haiku; shades of SE Asia!
ocean waves~~~
the falling sun
burns the sand
May 10th, 2017 at 12:55 pm
Lots of intrigue in this one. I love how something so ordinary as a box on a kitchen table becomes a gateway for mystery. The unopened box and the foreign headlines provide the tension that leave us with a feeling of anxiousness. Nice Michael.
May 12th, 2017 at 2:38 pm
The box is actually opened (unpacked).
May 11th, 2017 at 3:20 am
Interesting. It's like
A few things certain
A few ascertained
Life is all about present.
May 17th, 2017 at 2:44 am
Intriguing, Michael. This felt like someone who has just arrived in a new environment where everything is strange.
marion
May 23rd, 2017 at 10:37 am
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