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1. Magyar Says:
   May 26th, 2017 at 1:38 pm

   __ Ah… . This senryu, well said Dave. _m

   a long drive
   we stop and talk to the trees
   no answers

2. Dave Read Says:
   May 26th, 2017 at 5:08 pm

   Thank you Magyar.

3. Pris Campbell Says:
   May 26th, 2017 at 4:53 pm

   I LOVE this! Dave Read is one of my favorite writers of haiku/senryu.

4. Dave Read Says:
   May 26th, 2017 at 5:09 pm

   Thank you very much Pris. That means a lot too me. :)

5. Marion Clarke Says:
   May 27th, 2017 at 3:01 am

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   Brilliant, Dave – as usual!

   marion

6. Dave Read Says:
   May 27th, 2017 at 7:06 am

   Thanks Marion!

7. Alan Summers Says:
   May 27th, 2017 at 3:58 am

   Hi Dave,

   And 'wry grass' too?

   I hope it wasn't after too much coffee, although that mean a lot of vitamins and minerals for them.

   I dread to think what happens at the next pitstop. ;-)

   A fun senryu!

   warmest regards,
   Alan

8. Dave Read Says:
   May 27th, 2017 at 7:05 am

   Thank you Alan.

9. aniketnikhade Says:
   May 29th, 2017 at 9:49 pm

   Few things have changed
   Few remain
   Life continues with same.

   Trees have made a progress in there growth, new flowers have come up. Now all they need is more water to look better than before.

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