pit stop we water the roadside flowers
—Dave Read
Issue 17.1 | 26 May 2017
__ Ah… . This senryu, well said Dave. _m
a long drive we stop and talk to the trees no answers
Thank you Magyar.
I LOVE this! Dave Read is one of my favorite writers of haiku/senryu.
Thank you very much Pris. That means a lot too me. :)
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Brilliant, Dave – as usual!
marion
Thanks Marion!
Hi Dave,
And 'wry grass' too?
I hope it wasn't after too much coffee, although that mean a lot of vitamins and minerals for them.
I dread to think what happens at the next pitstop. ;-)
A fun senryu!
warmest regards, Alan
Thank you Alan.
Few things have changed Few remain Life continues with same.
Trees have made a progress in there growth, new flowers have come up. Now all they need is more water to look better than before.
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May 26th, 2017 at 1:38 pm
__ Ah… . This senryu, well said Dave. _m
a long drive
we stop and talk to the trees
no answers
May 26th, 2017 at 5:08 pm
Thank you Magyar.
May 26th, 2017 at 4:53 pm
I LOVE this! Dave Read is one of my favorite writers of haiku/senryu.
May 26th, 2017 at 5:09 pm
Thank you very much Pris. That means a lot too me. :)
May 27th, 2017 at 3:01 am
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Brilliant, Dave – as usual!
marion
May 27th, 2017 at 7:06 am
Thanks Marion!
May 27th, 2017 at 3:58 am
Hi Dave,
And 'wry grass' too?
I hope it wasn't after too much coffee, although that mean a lot of vitamins and minerals for them.
I dread to think what happens at the next pitstop. ;-)
A fun senryu!
warmest regards,
Alan
May 27th, 2017 at 7:05 am
Thank you Alan.
May 29th, 2017 at 9:49 pm
Few things have changed
Few remain
Life continues with same.
Trees have made a progress in there growth, new flowers have come up. Now all they need is more water to look better than before.