pit stop we water the roadside flowers Published by Dave Read Dave writes short poems. You can find his work on his blog, davereadpoetry.blogspot.ca. View all posts by Dave Read
Hi Dave, And 'wry grass' too? I hope it wasn't after too much coffee, although that mean a lot of vitamins and minerals for them. I dread to think what happens at the next pitstop. ;-) A fun senryu! warmest regards, Alan Reply
Few things have changed Few remain Life continues with same. Trees have made a progress in there growth, new flowers have come up. Now all they need is more water to look better than before. Reply
__ Ah… . This senryu, well said Dave. _m
a long drive
we stop and talk to the trees
no answers
Thank you Magyar.
I LOVE this! Dave Read is one of my favorite writers of haiku/senryu.
Thank you very much Pris. That means a lot too me. :)
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Brilliant, Dave – as usual!
marion
Thanks Marion!
Hi Dave,
And 'wry grass' too?
I hope it wasn't after too much coffee, although that mean a lot of vitamins and minerals for them.
I dread to think what happens at the next pitstop. ;-)
A fun senryu!
warmest regards,
Alan
Thank you Alan.
Few things have changed
Few remain
Life continues with same.
Trees have made a progress in there growth, new flowers have come up. Now all they need is more water to look better than before.