garden Buddha knee deep in dead leaves once again plans for the year have gone astray Previously published in the tanka journal Gusts: Contemporary Tanka and the author’s poetry book about the blue moon.
—Joanne Morcom
Issue 09.1 | 14 January 2010
I like this. I also like it when plans go astray. Thank you for this.
Doesn’t it look beautiful like this? Much better than a well-combed garden …
Paints a picture we have all seen now and again…
The first two lines are a good start for something. Your conclusion however, whilst clever sounding, is much too narrow a view of events as we find them here on the ground (rather than the wooden desk.)
I agree with Christian Lemburg…
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January 14th, 2010 at 1:04 pm
I like this. I also like it when plans
go astray. Thank you for this.
January 14th, 2010 at 2:23 pm
Doesn’t it look beautiful like this? Much better than a well-combed garden …
January 14th, 2010 at 3:09 pm
Paints a picture we have all seen now and again…
January 14th, 2010 at 5:08 pm
The first two lines are a good start for something. Your conclusion however, whilst clever sounding, is much too narrow a view of events as we find them here on the ground (rather than the wooden desk.)
January 15th, 2010 at 8:03 pm
I agree with Christian Lemburg…