garden Buddha
knee deep in dead leaves
once again
plans for the year
have gone astray
Previously published in the tanka journal Gusts: Contemporary Tanka and the author’s poetry book about the blue moon.
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garden Buddha
knee deep in dead leaves
once again
plans for the year
have gone astray
Previously published in the tanka journal Gusts: Contemporary Tanka and the author’s poetry book about the blue moon.
I like this. I also like it when plans
go astray. Thank you for this.
Doesn’t it look beautiful like this? Much better than a well-combed garden …
Paints a picture we have all seen now and again…
The first two lines are a good start for something. Your conclusion however, whilst clever sounding, is much too narrow a view of events as we find them here on the ground (rather than the wooden desk.)
I agree with Christian Lemburg…