almost spring swinging my cane to a new beat
—Adelaide B. Shaw
Issue 20.1 | 6 April 2020
So up“beat”. Thank you! Perhaps it is the word swinging, and the season being spring – this haiku made me feel happy. It feels good to feel happy in these dire times.
I do love your “new beat”, Adelaide!
Absolutely lovely ku, Adelaide
Lovely poem. Positivity is one of the secrets to living a fulfilled life, no doubt.
What a wonderful poem for a Monday morning in the time of Covid. Thanks, Adelaide & tiny words.
Thank you, Adelaide! Really wonderful!
A real mood lifter. Thanks, Adelaide.
Here's an oldie that shares a first line with yours:
almost spring she invites me in to her selfie
White Petals; born into this season; now is new. __ Grand, Adelaide: a new beat in each and every day, this charm of your thought. _m
window sill spring moonlight gathers on the dust
The one who knows how to swing the cane will always be Spring! A joyous ku!
Lovely, thank you!
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April 6th, 2020 at 8:18 am
So up“beat”. Thank you! Perhaps it is the word swinging, and the season being spring – this haiku made me feel happy. It feels good to feel happy in these dire times.
April 6th, 2020 at 8:51 am
I do love your “new beat”, Adelaide!
April 6th, 2020 at 9:01 am
Absolutely lovely ku, Adelaide
April 6th, 2020 at 9:59 am
Lovely poem. Positivity is one of the secrets to living a fulfilled life, no doubt.
April 6th, 2020 at 10:31 am
What a wonderful poem for a Monday morning in the time of Covid. Thanks, Adelaide &
tiny words.
April 6th, 2020 at 11:10 am
Thank you, Adelaide! Really wonderful!
April 6th, 2020 at 12:36 pm
A real mood lifter. Thanks, Adelaide.
Here's an oldie that shares a first line with yours:
almost spring
she invites me in
to her selfie
April 6th, 2020 at 1:09 pm
White Petals; born into this season; now is new.
__ Grand, Adelaide: a new beat in each and every day, this charm of your thought. _m
April 8th, 2020 at 4:47 am
window sill
spring moonlight gathers
on the dust
April 9th, 2020 at 7:13 am
The one who knows how to swing the cane will always be Spring! A joyous ku!
April 11th, 2020 at 9:03 am
Lovely, thank you!