The phrase "I turn" or "I turn into" is a fascination moment when we can be transformed, and the power of nature, in your case, it's Summer, which is kinda extending the warmer end of Spring into a brand new season. And of course we need to renew ourselves alongside each season.
For me, as much as I love late Spring, and then Summer bringing "on the green" it's actually snow that I turn to, for comfort, transformation, inspiration, and a return to childhood:
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the blue note I turn to wind-spun snow
Alan Summers
Blithe Spirit 23.4 (November 2013)
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Runner-up, The Haiku Calendar Competition 2014
June 21st, 2021 at 8:33 am
Thank you tinywords editors for featuring my monoku!
June 22nd, 2021 at 2:10 am
Wonderful one line haiku!!!
The phrase "I turn" or "I turn into" is a fascination moment when we can be transformed, and the power of nature, in your case, it's Summer, which is kinda extending the warmer end of Spring into a brand new season. And of course we need to renew ourselves alongside each season.
For me, as much as I love late Spring, and then Summer bringing "on the green" it's actually snow that I turn to, for comfort, transformation, inspiration, and a return to childhood:
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the blue note I turn to wind-spun snow
Alan Summers
Blithe Spirit 23.4 (November 2013)
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Runner-up, The Haiku Calendar Competition 2014
June 25th, 2021 at 1:25 am
Thank you, Alan. You comments and ku inspire me.
I rarely write haiku with a summer motif.
Something I (re)learn when putting together a new haiku collection.
June 25th, 2021 at 2:31 am
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Look forward to reading the new haiku collection!
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Here's to Jack K, and also a wee glass of Jack D too! :-)
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the summer continuous reel of road Jack
Alan Summers
haikai/monostich series Mistero due volte
June 22nd, 2021 at 6:46 am
snow swirl; within each dizzy flake; seasons change.
__ My minimal thought… we all could be that 'flake'. _m