spring pond a raindrop passes through its own reflection Published by Laryalee Fraser Laryalee Fraser lives in British Columbia, Canada. In 2006 she compiled an online haiku anthology: a procession of ripples. View all posts by Laryalee Fraser
Lary, _To me, you’ve shown a paradigm of continuum… very nicely done! watching drops falling into themselves again _M Reply
Nice one Lary! the geraniums flowering again just before the rain Potpourri Publications U.S.A. April 1994 Reply
Lary, you managed to put into words the LIGHT in which you saw that raindrop before it vanished from your mind..! Fresh,insightful and flowing haiku.Enjoyed. Reply
Thanks, Kala! Hi Andrea, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Magyar, you’ve caught the moment! Hi Angelika…thanks! Thank you, elena! David, it’s nice to meet you…thanks very much! Bill, it’s so good to see you… it’s not always easy, lol! Alan, I see petals speckled by rain…nice! Rita, what a lovely comment…I enjoy the rain…but I wish it would warm up! ;-) Lary Reply
This is one of those haiku that makes me stop and go WOW. I get lost in the words and the image. Reply
Lovely Lary!
Hats off to you!
warmly,
kala
Nice! Very classic ku…
Lary,
_To me, you’ve shown a paradigm of continuum… very nicely done!
watching drops
falling into themselves
again
_M
i enjoyed to read your haiku, Lary!
Very interesting
Illuminating!
Thank you, Laryalee
Laryalee,
This haiku was simply beautiful! Good write!
~David Fox
Ah, Lary, you make it look so easy.
Nice one Lary!
the geraniums
flowering again
just before the rain
Lary, you managed to put into words the LIGHT in which you saw that raindrop before it vanished from your mind..!
Fresh,insightful and flowing haiku.Enjoyed.
Thanks, Kala!
Hi Andrea, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Magyar, you’ve caught the moment!
Hi Angelika…thanks!
Thank you, elena!
David, it’s nice to meet you…thanks very much!
Bill, it’s so good to see you…
it’s not always easy, lol!
Alan, I see petals speckled by rain…nice!
Rita, what a lovely comment…I enjoy
the rain…but I wish it would warm up!
;-)
Lary
predawn puddle-
even before the rain
the aches
the pain
This is one of those haiku that makes me stop and go WOW. I get lost in the words and the image.