Both pertinent qunteioss, Lauren.When a friend gives us a gift which we toss aside what would we say when he asks Did you like my gift? To add a religious (not neccessarily of any particular faith) slant:He has given us this Gift and when we finally meet Him, what would we say when He asks I waited long for you. How did you get lost, did my Gift not work? Thank you for your visit and lovely comment.Luv and hugz,Eric
December 10th, 2010 at 8:01 pm
Now' that is great contemporary haiku!!!
December 10th, 2010 at 8:42 pm
I also get a daily e-mail of a translation of Isa. The first time I read this I thought it was Isa.
December 10th, 2010 at 10:44 pm
Nice work.
December 11th, 2010 at 5:15 am
This is a really neat haiku.
December 11th, 2010 at 5:55 am
Wonderful.
December 12th, 2010 at 1:40 pm
morning star
showing the way
from dawn to day
much love
gillena
December 13th, 2010 at 10:11 am
Thank you for your kind words and responses. This one came right from my backyard.
December 13th, 2010 at 11:59 am
Excellent!
January 2nd, 2011 at 10:27 pm
I am transported to that moon scene.
Lost in the mystery of it.
January 2nd, 2011 at 10:31 pm
I am transported by the moon scene.
And captured by the mystery of it.
October 25th, 2015 at 11:59 am
Both pertinent qunteioss, Lauren.When a friend gives us a gift which we toss aside what would we say when he asks Did you like my gift? To add a religious (not neccessarily of any particular faith) slant:He has given us this Gift and when we finally meet Him, what would we say when He asks I waited long for you. How did you get lost, did my Gift not work? Thank you for your visit and lovely comment.Luv and hugz,Eric