lovers’ moon—
a cicada leaves its shell
on the fence post
Published by
Kathe L. Palka
Kathe lives near Flemington, New Jersey together with her husband of 36 years, Joseph and their beloved Welsh Pembroke corgi Garth. She writes in both free verse and Japanese forms. Together with Peter Newton, she co-edits the daily online micro-poetry journal T I N Y W O R D S.
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Both pertinent qunteioss, Lauren.When a friend gives us a gift which we toss aside what would we say when he asks Did you like my gift? To add a religious (not neccessarily of any particular faith) slant:He has given us this Gift and when we finally meet Him, what would we say when He asks I waited long for you. How did you get lost, did my Gift not work? Thank you for your visit and lovely comment.Luv and hugz,Eric
Now' that is great contemporary haiku!!!
I also get a daily e-mail of a translation of Isa. The first time I read this I thought it was Isa.
Nice work.
This is a really neat haiku.
Wonderful.
morning star
showing the way
from dawn to day
much love
gillena
Thank you for your kind words and responses. This one came right from my backyard.
Excellent!
I am transported to that moon scene.
Lost in the mystery of it.
I am transported by the moon scene.
And captured by the mystery of it.
Both pertinent qunteioss, Lauren.When a friend gives us a gift which we toss aside what would we say when he asks Did you like my gift? To add a religious (not neccessarily of any particular faith) slant:He has given us this Gift and when we finally meet Him, what would we say when He asks I waited long for you. How did you get lost, did my Gift not work? Thank you for your visit and lovely comment.Luv and hugz,Eric