no moon looking outdoors into snowlight
Previously published in Connecting Our Houses: A Calendar of Haiku/Senryu by Pat Laster and Dorothy McLaughlin, LovePat Press, Arkadelphia, AR 1997.
—Dorothy McLaughlin
Issue 11.1 | 4 April 2011
Like extremely. This haiku conveys a special feeling of solitude: simple and to the point…
getting drunk with the ripe moon cadmium blues
Alan Summers Publications credits: haijinx volume IV, issue 1 (2011)
Lovely Dorothy. Spare and beautiful.
….magical….thank you.
. snowed in I watch the streetlamps and dream of Narnia
Alan Summers Blithe Spirit vol. 20 no. 4 (2010)
The juxtaposition of 'no moon' and 'snowlight' is excellent. // Peter.
full moon starry night no boy in the streets fear stray bullets
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April 4th, 2011 at 10:16 am
Like extremely. This haiku conveys a special feeling of solitude: simple and to the point…
April 4th, 2011 at 10:55 am
getting drunk
with the ripe moon
cadmium blues
Alan Summers
Publications credits: haijinx volume IV, issue 1 (2011)
April 4th, 2011 at 12:41 pm
Lovely Dorothy. Spare and beautiful.
April 5th, 2011 at 2:56 pm
….magical….thank you.
April 20th, 2011 at 4:42 am
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snowed in
I watch the streetlamps
and dream of Narnia
Alan Summers
Blithe Spirit vol. 20 no. 4 (2010)
August 3rd, 2011 at 8:58 am
The juxtaposition of 'no moon' and 'snowlight' is excellent. // Peter.
September 27th, 2011 at 4:21 am
full moon starry night
no boy in the streets
fear stray bullets