no moon
looking outdoors
into snowlight
Previously published in Connecting Our Houses: A Calendar of Haiku/Senryu by Pat Laster and Dorothy McLaughlin, LovePat Press, Arkadelphia, AR 1997.
no moon
looking outdoors
into snowlight
Previously published in Connecting Our Houses: A Calendar of Haiku/Senryu by Pat Laster and Dorothy McLaughlin, LovePat Press, Arkadelphia, AR 1997.
Like extremely. This haiku conveys a special feeling of solitude: simple and to the point…
getting drunk
with the ripe moon
cadmium blues
Alan Summers
Publications credits: haijinx volume IV, issue 1 (2011)
Lovely Dorothy. Spare and beautiful.
….magical….thank you.
.
snowed in
I watch the streetlamps
and dream of Narnia
Alan Summers
Blithe Spirit vol. 20 no. 4 (2010)
The juxtaposition of 'no moon' and 'snowlight' is excellent. // Peter.
full moon starry night
no boy in the streets
fear stray bullets