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11 Responses

1. Helen Buckingham Says:
   August 16th, 2011 at 9:29 am

   Wow. Some experiences need no embellishment. Perfect.

2. kala ramesh Says:
   August 16th, 2011 at 9:38 am

   Thanks a ton, Helen
   :)

3. pbergonzi Says:
   August 16th, 2011 at 9:54 am

   Yeah, wow!

4. @andreochka Says:
   August 16th, 2011 at 10:29 am

   Stunning poem, Kala! Really enjoyed.

5. Alan Summers Says:
   August 16th, 2011 at 3:39 pm

   Good strong honest haiku, thank you.

   Alan, With Words

6. Barbara A Taylor Says:
   August 16th, 2011 at 3:42 pm

   good one, Kala

   peace and love

7. kala ramesh Says:
   August 16th, 2011 at 6:26 pm

   Thanks a lot.
   Really happy you were all able to relate to this
   :)

8. Christopher Pickslay Says:
   August 17th, 2011 at 11:44 am

   hushed voices
   metal on metal
   my daughter's first cry

9. tygrbill Says:
   August 26th, 2011 at 12:48 am

   we buried our child
   in a little wooden box
   the ground wet with rain

10. shaheen Says:
    September 24th, 2011 at 11:56 am

    kala words are always soothing specially in our part of the world

    tiny toy knife amulet
    stringed around his neck
    gunfires on birth

11. Interim Management Says:
    December 5th, 2016 at 5:47 am

    Yeah, this is great. I love this…..

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