ceiling mirror between screams I see my child being born
Shiki Monthly Kukai, February, 2011
—Kala Ramesh
Issue 11.2 | 16 August 2011
Wow. Some experiences need no embellishment. Perfect.
Thanks a ton, Helen :)
Yeah, wow!
Stunning poem, Kala! Really enjoyed.
Good strong honest haiku, thank you.
Alan, With Words
good one, Kala
peace and love
Thanks a lot. Really happy you were all able to relate to this :)
hushed voices metal on metal my daughter's first cry
we buried our child in a little wooden box the ground wet with rain
kala words are always soothing specially in our part of the world
tiny toy knife amulet stringed around his neck gunfires on birth
Yeah, this is great. I love this…..
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August 16th, 2011 at 9:29 am
Wow. Some experiences need no embellishment. Perfect.
August 16th, 2011 at 9:38 am
Thanks a ton, Helen
:)
August 16th, 2011 at 9:54 am
Yeah, wow!
August 16th, 2011 at 10:29 am
Stunning poem, Kala! Really enjoyed.
August 16th, 2011 at 3:39 pm
Good strong honest haiku, thank you.
Alan, With Words
August 16th, 2011 at 3:42 pm
good one, Kala
peace and love
August 16th, 2011 at 6:26 pm
Thanks a lot.
Really happy you were all able to relate to this
:)
August 17th, 2011 at 11:44 am
hushed voices
metal on metal
my daughter's first cry
August 26th, 2011 at 12:48 am
we buried our child
in a little wooden box
the ground wet with rain
September 24th, 2011 at 11:56 am
kala words are always soothing specially in our part of the world
tiny toy knife amulet
stringed around his neck
gunfires on birth
December 5th, 2016 at 5:47 am
Yeah, this is great. I love this…..