snow all night
the silence
thickens


8 Responses

  1. Carole Dwinell Says:

    I like how this beautiful poem has layers. It could be an observation of the weather with a feeling of being either in a forest or perhaps even in town with the sounds of traffic, etc being muffled by the snow and yet… it speaks of emotions, of coldness, of distance and darkening.
    Well done.

  2. Rhoda Galgiani Says:

    Represents to me of being alone during a cold period of ones life. Well written!

  3. Gosia Zamorska Says:

    I like it.

  4. Gabi Greve Says:

    .

    heavy snowfall –
    a white silence
    deepens

    From 2005
    http://happyhaiku.blogspot.com/2005/12/heavy-snowfall.html

    .

  5. syllable┬║17 Says:

    Gabi Greve takes the prize. Well done – an excellent use of kigo!

    next morning
    the snow was over
    everything

    ^_^

  6. Alison Hedlund Says:

    What Carole said! This one keeps opening up and out. Lovely.

  7. martin1223 Says:

    silence
    snowflakes melt on the window

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