On a bed of leaves,
a deer skeleton picked clean,
save one furry hoof.


10 Responses

  1. gergely lászló Says:

    in hungarian:

    levélágyon
    őzcsontváz csupaszra rágva
    kivéve egy szőrös patát

  2. jdbrush Says:

    Wow, I wish I could hear what this sounds like. Very cool to see it, though.

  3. gergely lászló Says:

    I'll keep your wish in mind and sometimes in the future will fabricate a sound file and send it for you on your blog/site…

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  5. angie Says:

    somehow, you made a vulture's meal beautiful.

  6. Deb Says:

    This is beautiful, James.

  7. Heather Says:

    You've managed to make a deer carcass seem peaceful.

  8. RadioNowhere Says:

    Wonderful, James…

  9. jdbrush Says:

    Thanks for your comments on this, everyone.

  10. Crafty Green Poet Says:

    excellent, starkly beautiful

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