up to the summit up to a hawk’s cry up to the sun
—Dietmar Tauchner
Issue 11.1 | 14 April 2011
Like extremely…
Very nice.
great piece thank you
I am feeling the exultation, too. Exquisite poem.
Oh, I love the ascending arc of this poem! Wonderful!
excelsior
great image, good work!
Fine haiku and use of poetry techniques including a tinge of dissonance to slow the reader down so they have to read the poem and not rush it.
Alan
very nice
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April 14th, 2011 at 12:07 pm
Like extremely…
April 14th, 2011 at 4:51 pm
Very nice.
April 14th, 2011 at 8:47 pm
great piece thank you
April 14th, 2011 at 9:54 pm
I am feeling the exultation, too. Exquisite poem.
April 15th, 2011 at 4:01 pm
Oh, I love the ascending arc of this poem! Wonderful!
April 15th, 2011 at 4:24 pm
excelsior
April 16th, 2011 at 12:06 pm
great image, good work!
April 20th, 2011 at 4:16 am
Fine haiku and use of poetry techniques including a tinge of dissonance to slow the reader down so they have to read the poem and not rush it.
Alan
November 17th, 2011 at 1:31 am
very nice