up to the summit up to a hawk’s cry up to the sun

10 Responses

  1. @andreochka Says:

    Like extremely…

  2. Jean LeBlanc Says:

    Very nice.

  3. Ross CLARK Says:

    great piece thank you

  4. Alison Says:

    I am feeling the exultation, too. Exquisite poem.

  5. Melissa Spurr Says:

    Oh, I love the ascending arc of this poem! Wonderful!

  6. johnj savoie Says:


  7. Cezar F. Ciobîc? Says:

    great image, good work!

  8. haikutec Says:

    Fine haiku and use of poetry techniques including a tinge of dissonance to slow the reader down so they have to read the poem and not rush it.


  9. shaheen Says:

    very nice

  10. Madhuri Says:

    So visual, I climbed the summit.

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