Just last night, on the Create channel, I watched a stormchaser / photographer as they chased a tornado and took breath-taking pictures, tornado sirens wailing in the audio, so this brought vivid images! I like that you involved the absence of the stars…
September 22nd, 2011 at 12:14 pm
Just last night, on the Create channel, I watched a stormchaser / photographer as they chased a tornado and took breath-taking pictures, tornado sirens wailing in the audio, so this brought vivid images! I like that you involved the absence of the stars…
September 22nd, 2011 at 12:14 pm
I love the form of this (as well as the imagery). 5-7-…and the last line (if it were a traditional haiku) got swept away by the wind.
September 22nd, 2011 at 12:24 pm
Yes! The tornado takes everything from us, even the forevermore stars! Thank you for this posting.
September 24th, 2011 at 1:17 am
lovely words but i am not bold enough to submit haiku of two lines like you native writers
September 28th, 2011 at 4:04 am
Hi Anthony,
Effectively frightening poem in just two lines.
Alan