just past mauve (haiga)

 

 

just past mauve     paddling hard for a dark shore

 


10 Responses

  1. snowbirdpress Says:

    Oh, How I've loved this chapbook…"dead reckoning"… finding our way when there are no fixed reference points along the way…. Much appreciated. Merrill

  2. Susan Constable Says:

    Is this just before you fell in, Jim? LOL

    Lovely work . . . both haiku and image.

    Susan

  3. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    I love this poem and image, Jim. "Just past mauve…"

  4. Mary Says:

    I like how you've not stated that darkness rises from the earth rather than descending from the sky….nice capture.

  5. barbara a taylor Says:

    altogether perfect!

    peace and love

  6. martin1223 Says:

    What a great image and I really enjoyed, "Just past mauve…”, but as you know I am not competent in English grammar; so I guess that I am unsure of and uncomfortable with the paddler being implied.

  7. Alison H. Says:

    I really get that feeling of the joy of dusk, followed by the necessity to get to shore. Lovely.

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