biopsy i am my heartbeat


16 Responses

  1. Lynne Says:

    This is exquisite, Kirsten.

  2. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Wow!

  3. patricia reid Says:

    utterly present, thankyou

  4. Margaret Dornaus Says:

    beautiful . . .

  5. Alison H. Says:

    Hearing the beat of life in ourselves does bring us back to the life force essence. Simply, beautifully penned.

  6. Kirsten Cliff Says:

    Thanks so much to all for your enthusiastic comments here. This one still touches a sore point for me . . .

  7. Romano Zeraschi Says:

    We are close to you…

  8. Penny Harter Says:

    This beautifully captures that feeling, Kristen. . . I've been there . . . and "touches a sore point" probably literally as well as emotionally. Thank you.

  9. Cara Holman Says:

    Very poignant, Kirsten.

  10. Robert Says:

    Perfect

  11. Alan Summers Says:

    Good and real.

  12. Shawn Whitney Says:

    Love it. I should have written one on my brain MRI a couple of weeks ago. It's like seeing into you. Very nice.

  13. Romano Zeraschi Says:

    I put it at the top of my favorites.
    good luck, Kirsten !

  14. Jennifer Corpe Says:

    Excellent! This one has the strongest feeling in a haiku that I've read in a long time!

  15. S.M. Abeles Says:

    Perfect Kristen.

  16. Lorin Ford Says:

    This one certainly captures the tension involved. Getting down to essentials a long way further than 'I am what I eat'. The brevity and the one line form suits the content very well.

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