the time we are given…
sparks rise through darkness
to join the stars


5 Responses

  1. amitmadhvani Says:

    nice need more

  2. Timothy Hicks Says:

    How cool! I visualize everyone gathered around a campfire roasting marshmallows. Very nicely penned!

  3. Alison Hedlund Says:

    A cosmic feeling to this. We are both sparks and stars……

  4. Annette Makino Says:

    Thank you all! I'm glad this one resonates for people.

  5. Gisele LeBlanc Says:

    Such lovely imagery, and I like how it makes us look up. I feel like I'm there. :)

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