midnight thunderstorm
her face in the lightning flash
suddenly closer

4 Responses

  1. Anna Says:

    Thanks for the nice poem, I found it quite inspiring.

  2. Jenny Says:

    Excellent way to convey a jolt! A rare feeling in haiku. Well done.

  3. Timothy Hicks Says:

    Took me right there in the moment! The flash of a face in the middle of darkness – how eerie and well written!

  4. Gisele LeBlanc Says:

    I like this one. The imagery is very effective!

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