midnight thunderstorm her face in the lightning flash suddenly closer
—John Hawkhead
Issue 14.2 | 5 December 2014
Thanks for the nice poem, I found it quite inspiring.
Excellent way to convey a jolt! A rare feeling in haiku. Well done.
Took me right there in the moment! The flash of a face in the middle of darkness – how eerie and well written!
I like this one. The imagery is very effective!
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December 5th, 2014 at 10:06 am
Thanks for the nice poem, I found it quite inspiring.
December 5th, 2014 at 10:33 am
Excellent way to convey a jolt! A rare feeling in haiku. Well done.
December 7th, 2014 at 9:33 pm
Took me right there in the moment! The flash of a face in the middle of darkness – how eerie and well written!
December 17th, 2014 at 5:47 pm
I like this one. The imagery is very effective!