stone paths the making of a pilgrim

 


8 Responses

  1. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Wonderful, thank you

  2. Laura Maffei Says:

    Beautiful.

  3. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    Lovely! The resonance in your poem is marvelous . . .

  4. Magyar Says:

    a pilgrim
    becomes this time worn path
    earth birth stone

    A humble senryu echo__ to complement. _m

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    A solid poem that resonates.

    marion

  6. Pravat Says:

    A brilliant monostich!

  7. Alan Summers Says:

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    stone paths the making of a pilgrim

    —CHERIE HUNTER DAY
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    I feel this is both literal and an allegory perhaps. Perhaps we who walk rough hewn paths also tackle rough hewn problems straight on, wanting to be, if not a better person, a humbler one.

    Wonderful poem and something to read many many times over the year and into next year.
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    .
    slug paths
    do they see through
    the eyes of God?

    Alan Summers

    From:
    c.2.2. Anthology of short-verse
    ed. Brendan Slater & Alan Summers
    (Yet To Be Named Free Press 2013)
    .

  8. joolo Says:

    pretty cool

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