—CHERIE HUNTER DAY
.
.
I feel this is both literal and an allegory perhaps. Perhaps we who walk rough hewn paths also tackle rough hewn problems straight on, wanting to be, if not a better person, a humbler one.
Wonderful poem and something to read many many times over the year and into next year.
.
.
slug paths
do they see through
the eyes of God?
Alan Summers
From:
c.2.2. Anthology of short-verse
ed. Brendan Slater & Alan Summers
(Yet To Be Named Free Press 2013)
.
April 7th, 2015 at 10:39 am
Wonderful, thank you
April 7th, 2015 at 3:57 pm
Beautiful.
April 8th, 2015 at 6:10 am
Lovely! The resonance in your poem is marvelous . . .
April 8th, 2015 at 8:09 am
a pilgrim
becomes this time worn path
earth birth stone
A humble senryu echo__ to complement. _m
April 8th, 2015 at 8:32 am
A solid poem that resonates.
marion
April 9th, 2015 at 10:36 am
A brilliant monostich!
April 9th, 2015 at 4:44 pm
.
stone paths the making of a pilgrim
—CHERIE HUNTER DAY
.
.
I feel this is both literal and an allegory perhaps. Perhaps we who walk rough hewn paths also tackle rough hewn problems straight on, wanting to be, if not a better person, a humbler one.
Wonderful poem and something to read many many times over the year and into next year.
.
.
slug paths
do they see through
the eyes of God?
Alan Summers
From:
c.2.2. Anthology of short-verse
ed. Brendan Slater & Alan Summers
(Yet To Be Named Free Press 2013)
.
September 1st, 2015 at 6:17 pm
pretty cool