Lovely sounds in this haiku that 'string' it together tightly – assonance in: with… string… winter… int… and even the eye rhyme with vines. And 'rosary' has an emotionally satisfying rhythm to it too. Really like it.
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April 6th, 2015 at 8:16 am
Lovely sounds in this haiku that 'string' it together tightly – assonance in: with… string… winter… int… and even the eye rhyme with vines. And 'rosary' has an emotionally satisfying rhythm to it too. Really like it.
April 6th, 2015 at 8:26 am
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April 6th, 2015 at 11:26 am
Very nicely done! Beautiful music to this haiku, strong imagery, and resonant feeling behind the piece.
April 6th, 2015 at 3:48 pm
I love the haunting visual image created here.
April 8th, 2015 at 8:33 am
I love this – it has a very Gothic feel.
marion
April 14th, 2015 at 2:14 am
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withered vines—
stringing winter into
a rosary
—SONDRA BYRNES
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Very vivid!
warmest regards,
Alan
April 20th, 2015 at 11:01 am
A very well crafted poem!
September 1st, 2015 at 6:17 pm
hmm, dont know what to say
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