withered vines —
stringing winter into
a rosary
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Sondra J. Byrnes
Sondra J. Byrnes, relatively new to writing poetry, writes haiku, senryu, and tanka. Her poetry has been published in Frogpond, Prune Juice, tinywords, A Hundred Gourds, Ribbons, Modern Haiku, The Heron's Nest, Moongarlic, among others. Along with short form poetry, Byrnes is interested in ikebana and chanoyu. Byrnes is a retired law and business professor from the University of Notre Dame; she lives in Santa Fe, New Mexico.
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Lovely sounds in this haiku that 'string' it together tightly – assonance in: with… string… winter… int… and even the eye rhyme with vines. And 'rosary' has an emotionally satisfying rhythm to it too. Really like it.
Ya.
Very nicely done! Beautiful music to this haiku, strong imagery, and resonant feeling behind the piece.
I love the haunting visual image created here.
I love this – it has a very Gothic feel.
marion
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withered vines—
stringing winter into
a rosary
—SONDRA BYRNES
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Very vivid!
warmest regards,
Alan
A very well crafted poem!
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