unfinished argument all the thistles down the lane flowering
—Patrick Doerksen
Issue 15.2 | 16 December 2015
The more I read this haiku, the more I love it.
. unfinished argument all the thistles down the lane flowering
—PATRICK DOERKSEN
A fine example of how juxtaposition can be successful in haiku. . .
gunsmoke tea a dog argues itself to death
Alan Summers Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012) .
Despite the argument, it's impossible to ignore the flowering thistles. Lovely.
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December 16th, 2015 at 9:51 am
The more I read this haiku, the more I love it.
December 16th, 2015 at 12:45 pm
.
unfinished argument
all the thistles down the lane
flowering
—PATRICK DOERKSEN
A fine example of how juxtaposition can be successful in haiku.
.
.
gunsmoke tea
a dog argues
itself to death
Alan Summers
Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)
.
December 22nd, 2015 at 8:13 am
Despite the argument, it's impossible to ignore the flowering thistles. Lovely.
marion