unfinished argument
all the thistles down the lane
flowering

 


3 Responses

  1. marykendall Says:

    The more I read this haiku, the more I love it.

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    unfinished argument
    all the thistles down the lane
    flowering

    —PATRICK DOERKSEN

    A fine example of how juxtaposition can be successful in haiku.
    .
    .

    gunsmoke tea
    a dog argues
    itself to death

    Alan Summers
    Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)
    .

  3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Despite the argument, it's impossible to ignore the flowering thistles. Lovely.

    marion

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