pear blossoms
another parking ticket
for my stolen car


6 Responses

  1. chief276 Says:

    The pathos of contemporary life, done with a smile. Good one, Debbie. Bill Kenney

  2. Garry Says:

    I like how the juxtaposition with ‘pear blossoms’ artfully merges these odd, random surprises into the inevitable rotation of the seasons.

  3. Kemper Elstun Says:

    My very small light
    It burns, but not too brightly
    It burns just the same

  4. Karen O'Leary Says:

    Debrorah,

    It's been awhile but I wanted to drop by and tell you I enjoyed your multi-dimensional poem. The ending was certainly surprise. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Congratulations on your publication.

    Blessings,
    Karen

  5. Gregory Longenecker Says:

    Not exactly manna from heaven, but an excellent haiku, Debbie

  6. Valentina Says:

    I like it.

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