campfire
I disappear
with the moth

 


5 Responses

  1. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    Lovely!

  2. Magyar Says:

    __In my humble thought, I compliment your fine haiku Jeff; from my long ago scribble book, I leave this parallel.

    listen
    among the silent flowers
    a butterfly

    _m

  3. Mary Jo Says:

    Such a good visual–it is a small painting.

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    campfire
    I disappear
    with the moth

    —JEFF HOAGLAND
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    I really like this!

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    .
    A non-haikai stanza from a haibun entitled Crow Star:

    a susurrus of moths
    around fire that flickers on

    Alan Summers
    Anthology Credit: Journeys 2015, An Anthology of International Haibun
    Ed. Angelee Deodhar ISBN 978-1515359876
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  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Oooh – I found this quite dark!

    Great atmosphere, Jeff.

    marion

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