pooling where the creek bends fish
Issue 16.1 | 12 July 2016
cooling where the creek bends fish
Wonderful one line haiku, love where the creek bends fish!
soul her fish fingers to the second knuckle
Publication Credits: Roadrunner 12.3 MASKS 4 (2012)
leaves begin to fall this face too evolves from fish
From the sequence: White Dust Ghosts – a series of haiku poems
Publication Credit: Tribe issue 22 (October 2013)
Really enjoy playing with this striking minimalist haiku. And great last word – single syllable, concrete. Just lovely.
Mind bending. It has that wonderful quality of stimulating the imagination with it being possible to pin down it's meaning.
Thanks everyone! I am grateful for your kind comments.
Love it, Dave! :)
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