pooling where the creek bends fish Published by Dave Read Dave writes short poems. You can find his work on his blog, davereadpoetry.blogspot.ca. View all posts by Dave Read
. cooling where the creek bends fish —DAVE READ Wonderful one line haiku, love where the creek bends fish! * * soul her fish fingers to the second knuckle Alan Summers Publication Credits: Roadrunner 12.3 MASKS 4 (2012) * * leaves begin to fall this face too evolves from fish Alan Summers From the sequence: White Dust Ghosts – a series of haiku poems Publication Credit: Tribe issue 22 (October 2013) . Reply
Really enjoy playing with this striking minimalist haiku. And great last word – single syllable, concrete. Just lovely. Reply
Mind bending. It has that wonderful quality of stimulating the imagination with it being possible to pin down it's meaning. Reply
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cooling where the creek bends fish
—DAVE READ
Wonderful one line haiku, love where the creek bends fish!
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soul her fish fingers to the second knuckle
Alan Summers
Publication Credits: Roadrunner 12.3 MASKS 4 (2012)
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leaves begin to fall this face too evolves from fish
Alan Summers
From the sequence: White Dust Ghosts – a series of haiku poems
Publication Credit: Tribe issue 22 (October 2013)
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Really enjoy playing with this striking minimalist haiku. And great last word – single syllable, concrete. Just lovely.
Lovely
Mind bending. It has that wonderful quality of stimulating the imagination with it being possible to pin down it's meaning.
Thanks everyone! I am grateful for your kind comments.
Love it, Dave! :)
marion