early frost
our first fight
over nothing

 


6 Responses

  1. Gary Michael Dault Says:

    exquisitely deft.

  2. Marie Shimane Says:

    morning frost
    the eventual melt
    into nothingness

  3. Mary Jo Balistreri Says:

    Liked your ku today, Lauren. Thank you.

  4. andreacecon Says:

    heated argument
    the snowflakes
    melt in my mouth

  5. GenNov Says:

    snowflakes..
    plays
    with the autumn winds

  6. hoa khai truong Says:

    thank so much

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