after the monsoon
a light rain
Issue 16.2 | 12 December 2016
This one is lovely.
This one is lovely. Software says I have already submitted this, but of course I have not.
The only way I could get this to submit was to add the extra comment, so you may actually have more people trying to comment than are getting through.
__ In complement, I leave this echo; flip-flops left on the terrace were blown away by the monsoon, time to think:
the night storm stole my flip-flops
oh yes, I like this lots! thank you
I liked your juxtaposition very much.
Wonderful use of enjambment, breaking the lines:
I love how I can read and misread to my heart's content with those last two lines:
a light rain apology
Love it! Highly original and fresh.
Great! I love how I can read and misread to my heart's content with those last two lines
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