backlit by the morning star blackbird song

 

 


10 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg I Says:

    I liked your morning haiku!

    sunny at dawn

    mallard sips

    the pond shadows

  2. Sabra Says:

    Love it! Just beautiful.

  3. Alan Summers Says:

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    backlit by the morning star blackbird song

    —MARIETTA MCGREGOR
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    Wow! Backlit really makes this extra special!
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    Alan
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    this small ache and all the rain too robinsong

    Alan Summers
    Modern Haiku vol. 44.1 winter/spring 2013

    Anthology credit: naad anunaad: an anthology of contemporary international haiku ed. Shloka Shankar, Sanjuktaa Asopa, Kala Ramesh (India, 2016)

  4. aniketnik Says:

    It's unique, it's exclusive, still it draws the mind towards it and later on catches atl the attention making it's presence felt clearly – blackbird song.

  5. Norman Darlington Says:

    Wonderfully expressed, Marietta!

  6. MaryJo Says:

    pure music. A direct hit to my heart.

  7. Marietta McGregor Says:

    Thank you for the lovely comments, and for sharing your own haiku in response. Much appreciated! Marietta

  8. agnesevasavich Says:

    sound waves on light waves… love it!

  9. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    How beautiful, Marietta! I agree with Alan about 'backlit'.

    marion

  10. Jan Benson Says:

    Nicely played, Marietta
    Jan

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