backlit by the morning star blackbird song
—Marietta McGregor
Issue 17.1 | 24 April 2017
I liked your morning haiku!
sunny at dawn
mallard sips
the pond shadows
Love it! Just beautiful.
. backlit by the morning star blackbird song
—MARIETTA MCGREGOR . . Wow! Backlit really makes this extra special! . Alan . . this small ache and all the rain too robinsong
Alan Summers Modern Haiku vol. 44.1 winter/spring 2013
Anthology credit: naad anunaad: an anthology of contemporary international haiku ed. Shloka Shankar, Sanjuktaa Asopa, Kala Ramesh (India, 2016)
It's unique, it's exclusive, still it draws the mind towards it and later on catches atl the attention making it's presence felt clearly – blackbird song.
Wonderfully expressed, Marietta!
pure music. A direct hit to my heart.
Thank you for the lovely comments, and for sharing your own haiku in response. Much appreciated! Marietta
sound waves on light waves… love it!
How beautiful, Marietta! I agree with Alan about 'backlit'.
marion
Nicely played, Marietta Jan
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April 24th, 2017 at 8:52 am
I liked your morning haiku!
sunny at dawn
mallard sips
the pond shadows
April 24th, 2017 at 7:52 pm
Love it! Just beautiful.
April 24th, 2017 at 9:07 am
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backlit by the morning star blackbird song
—MARIETTA MCGREGOR
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Wow! Backlit really makes this extra special!
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Alan
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this small ache and all the rain too robinsong
Alan Summers
Modern Haiku vol. 44.1 winter/spring 2013
Anthology credit: naad anunaad: an anthology of contemporary international haiku ed. Shloka Shankar, Sanjuktaa Asopa, Kala Ramesh (India, 2016)
April 24th, 2017 at 9:25 am
It's unique, it's exclusive, still it draws the mind towards it and later on catches atl the attention making it's presence felt clearly – blackbird song.
April 24th, 2017 at 1:25 pm
Wonderfully expressed, Marietta!
April 24th, 2017 at 6:34 pm
pure music. A direct hit to my heart.
April 25th, 2017 at 5:04 pm
Thank you for the lovely comments, and for sharing your own haiku in response. Much appreciated! Marietta
April 26th, 2017 at 6:31 am
sound waves on light waves… love it!
May 8th, 2017 at 3:07 am
How beautiful, Marietta! I agree with Alan about 'backlit'.
marion
May 10th, 2017 at 10:25 am
Nicely played, Marietta
Jan