coming home to no new messages lingering rain
—Gabriel Bates
Issue 17.2 | 1 December 2017
Excellent Gabriel! Great job capturing a sense of ongoing loneliness.
And it always feels more lonely in the rain. Thank you for this poignant haiku
Very evocative and timely for me reading as the welcome rain pours here in Tasmania after days of heat. I've always found rain comforting so I offer a different take in response –
heatwave no internet connection the promise of rain
Beautiful, Gabriel! Well depicted loneliness ! Congratulations !
Well Done Gabriel!
"lingering" is a good choice here.
marion
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December 1st, 2017 at 1:55 pm
Excellent Gabriel! Great job capturing a sense of ongoing loneliness.
December 1st, 2017 at 3:39 pm
And it always feels more lonely in the rain. Thank you for this poignant haiku
December 2nd, 2017 at 4:57 pm
Very evocative and timely for me reading as the welcome rain pours here in Tasmania after days of heat. I've always found rain comforting so I offer a different take in response –
heatwave
no internet connection
the promise of rain
December 2nd, 2017 at 10:04 pm
Beautiful, Gabriel! Well depicted loneliness ! Congratulations !
December 3rd, 2017 at 12:49 am
Well Done Gabriel!
December 11th, 2017 at 3:01 pm
"lingering" is a good choice here.
marion