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lingering rain


6 Responses

  1. Dave Read Says:

    Excellent Gabriel! Great job capturing a sense of ongoing loneliness.

  2. MaryJo Says:

    And it always feels more lonely in the rain. Thank you for this poignant haiku

  3. janewilliams Says:

    Very evocative and timely for me reading as the welcome rain pours here in Tasmania after days of heat. I've always found rain comforting so I offer a different take in response –

    heatwave
    no internet connection
    the promise of rain

  4. Aparna Pathak Says:

    Beautiful, Gabriel! Well depicted loneliness ! Congratulations !

  5. Jan Benson Says:

    Well Done Gabriel!

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    "lingering" is a good choice here.

    marion

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