Gabriel Bates is a contemporary poet living in southeast Kansas. His work has appeared in several journals, online and in print. Keep up with him at facebook.com/gabrieljbates
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Excellent Gabriel! Great job capturing a sense of ongoing loneliness.
Very evocative and timely for me reading as the welcome rain pours here in Tasmania after days of heat. I've always found rain comforting so I offer a different take in response –
heatwave
no internet connection
the promise of rain
Excellent Gabriel! Great job capturing a sense of ongoing loneliness.
And it always feels more lonely in the rain. Thank you for this poignant haiku
Very evocative and timely for me reading as the welcome rain pours here in Tasmania after days of heat. I've always found rain comforting so I offer a different take in response –
heatwave
no internet connection
the promise of rain
Beautiful, Gabriel! Well depicted loneliness ! Congratulations !
Well Done Gabriel!
"lingering" is a good choice here.
marion