autumn sapling:
all twelve leaves
orange

—Bill Waters
        

About the author: Bill Waters
Titusville, NJ
bnwaters at verizon.net

Responses to the haiku for 4 November 2003 by Bill Waters

  1.  
    Craig McLanachan (cramar at actrix dot co dot nz)
    2003-11-05 01:34:42
     

    A very quiet haiku that shouts quality. Your perception leaves the reader with a sense of finding so much in so little.

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-11-06 14:23:51
     

    evergreens in winter:
    that special scent
    proclaiming the holidays

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2003-12-05 05:11:47
     

    leaf insect -
    swings with
    the leaves

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-07-23 19:46:35
     

    summer night, gentle rain --
    countless drops
    wash her tears away

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